Julie50

Member since March 30, 2012

Member for 14 years, 2 months

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Hello young Julie

Posted Oct 9, 2022 · 19 lines · 2 critiques

Dear Julie,
I have alot to say. For you are getting older every day.
You'll have so much fun being young, shall
I tell you what's to come?
You'll have a good life but you will have to fight
for it. There will be challenges this is true
but you will make it through.
There will be many good times and blessings to come. Your fun has just begun.
You're sixty one now, smart and wise.
You've been through some rough times,
but you survived!
So I just wanted to say hi, don't change a
thing. Things always work out when you believe. And all that you've achieved.
So be proud of yourself and be strong

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for the wait for you won't be long.
You'll be here soon where I am and we'll
be together again.
I love you
Julie

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October 2022
09 Sun

Received a critique
on Hello young Julie from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Looking back on a life well lived, not an easy life, a good life. Many more good years to come. Great poem, good rhyme. Tim"
09 Sun

Received a critique
on Hello young Julie from @Lavender
"Hi, Julie, A tender poem full of optimism and encouragement! Don't know of your intentions, but you may want to actually enter it into the Poem to Your Childhood Self Contest! It certainly fits the subject criteria. Tha…"
09 Sun

Posted a poem
Hello young Julie
"Dear Julie,"
Open thread 19 lines
June 2022
03 Fri

Received a critique
on Father from @Jackweb
"You really had good words to extol your father's goodness. Now coming to speak on your poem: You need to adopt Poetic Devices!!! Poetic devices are a form of a literary devices used in poetry. Poems are created out of p…"
02 Thu

Posted a poem
Father
"My Father was a good provider he did the best he could. I just wish he had spent more time"
Open thread 17 lines
March 2022
30 Wed

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March 2017
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March 2013
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March 2012
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Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
November 2007
06 Tue

Posted a poem
The Beach of Life
"A woman walking on the beach."
Open thread 13 lines
September 2007
19 Wed

First critique offered
on "Farewell Letter" by @Alijandra
June 2007
11 Mon

First publication
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Hello young Julie

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