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Troddew
Member since April 30, 2010
Member for 16 years, 1 month
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Lesson learned
Take control and manage your life
happiness is your goal, not strife
bring EVERYTHING into the light
No mtter how big or small... things will be alright
face life with honesty
and the courage will be there
making things that are hard…easy to bare
it sounds simple and yet so complex
whatever our decisions are defines what is next
Rest assured, no matter what road we are on...
Is a way of saying hello to the future and goodbye to what is gone...
Troddew’s timeline
- April 2025
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29 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
- April 2015
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29 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2011
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29 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
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07 ThuCritiqued
"Sleepless in Schenectady..." by @Geezer
"I found myself going from scanning it to finding myself reading it and smiling. LOVED IT!" - June 2010
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27 SunReceived a critique
on A Lesson Learned from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. Good advice in a rhyming poem which flows well. My favorite lines: face life with honesty and the courage will be there making things that are hard…easy to bare Always, Cat" -
21 MonReceived a critique
on Lesson learned from @Geezer
"First of all, let me say, that I am glad to see you posting. Secondly, I am enthused about your work. I like the way you put it... "Face life with honesty, and the courage will be there,making things that are hard...eas…" -
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19 SatCritiqued
"My Opponent" by @themoonman
"EXCELLANT example of how we are our own worse enemy --- L-O-V-E-D it :)" -
19 Sat
- May 2010
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22 Sat
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22 SatFirst critique offered
on "Killer Kitchen..." by @Geezer
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12 WedReceived a critique
on i Stand Alone from @weirdelf
"for 3 years on Neopoet, have an MA in poetry and have written reviews for poetry journals, Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroyi…" -
09 SunReceived a critique
on i Stand Alone from @weirdelf
"I think the problems for me are using first person in the title but third person in the poem and the word sentinel. Sentinel implies a duty or job, he has no choice but to stand alone. So if you made it a simile and cha…" -
08 SatReceived a critique
on i Stand Alone from @weirdelf
"I don't agree with the comments about splitting the second line, to me it adds impact to the third line. However I don't think the last line needs "still" spelling- sentienel sentinel Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepre…" -
06 ThuReceived a critique
on i Stand Alone from @Geezer
"I agree, it would look much better in separate lines. As they say, I feel ya. [Don't let Wendy know] Welcome to Neo. I just know, that you will have plenty of friends here. Feel free to message me anytime, ~ Gee" -
06 ThuReceived a critique
on i Stand Alone from @xena465
"Like Raven-Shakti said "so little words can say so much"...well done. It would look much better if you placed your poem in separate lines...just a suggestion. Rosina xena465" -
02 SunReceived a critique
on i Stand Alone from @Ravenshakti
"Some poems, in just a few words say it all...just like yours. This one, I feel deeply... Simply exquisite. Gentle regards, Raven-Shakti PS A very warm Welcome to Neopoet!" -
02 SunFirst publication
i Stand Alone
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02 Sun
- April 2010
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29 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
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