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tonebone
Member since December 14, 2017
Member for 8 years, 5 months
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Gun Lover
In this dream you cradle
Your rifle in your loving arms...
And like a newborn child
You rock ever so gently away
Time spent bullets under pillows
Yellow like tiny teeth.
Live rounds behind glass frames
Down your hallway
tonebone’s timeline
- December 2022
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14 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2020
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21 TueReceived a critique
on Gun Lover from @c lynn brooks
"This sounds like someone with ptsd as I knew someone with same love the line like tiny yellow teeth" -
20 Mon
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19 Sun
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19 SunReceived a critique
on Geneology from @Sparrow 42
"I agree with Gee, It is up to you who you take after and develop into. The Buck stops here and it is your fault who you become , Take care Aim for Everest, Yours Ian T" -
18 Sat
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18 Sat
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06 MonReceived a critique
on Asphyxiation from @Geezer
"that we take too big a mouthful and can't chew what we have before we swallow. How can we learn from our mistakes if we choke on the crap that we feed ourselves? ~ Geezer. ." -
05 Sun
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03 FriReceived a critique
on IN THIS DREAM from @Geezer
"loose thoughts can be especially dangerous in those scribbled dreams. You don't know where they've been or what their purpose is. They might be out to get you! How about tightening up these thoughts to make something of…" -
02 Thu
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- December 2018
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14 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2017
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16 SatReceived a critique
on applause from @themoonman
"I loved your "clap happy" mood, didn't get the "acide" ... what am I missing?" -
14 Thu
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14 ThuCritiqued
"Refugee Mother And Child by Chinua Achebe" by @Osadolor Osayande
"i felt as if i were an intruder, and even a little ashamed of witnessing it. perhaps that was it's objective. i'll say no more." -
14 ThuCritiqued
"Lonely Planet " by @Blue-eyed Bolla
"very nice little piece. simple meter lends itself to all but make no mistake about its simplicity, this piece was well thought out. thank you for it." -
14 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Lonely Planet " (since unpublished) by @Blue-eyed Bolla
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14 Thu
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14 ThuFirst publication
applause
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14 Thu
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14 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
disposition; antipoet
age; pentagerian
location; Helena, Mt.
I've had some formal training in creative writing though tend to disregard it. The dark content of work is important because, although my disposition is carefree I'm constantly reminded of the importance of being aware of my darkness so might not manifest itself in reality.
Location: us montana
Favorite Poets
ee cummings
dylan thomas
richard hugo
denise levertov
dr seuss
sylvia plath
allen ginsberg
most of the beat poets
sandberg
burgess
poe
i could go on and on and on
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