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Apr 05, 2020
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Asphyxiation
In this dream
You fill your throat
Before you choke
Regurgitate
Or swallow
Your hearasies
Are your disease
Of intellect
That's hollow.
— tonebone, Apr 05, 2020
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Part of the collection "In This Dream"
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Geezer
6 years 2 months ago
It seems...
that we take too big a mouthful and can't chew what we have before we swallow. How can we learn from our mistakes if we choke on the crap that we feed ourselves?
~ Geezer.
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