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Tiffany Smith
Member since April 13, 2023
Member for 3 years, 1 month
the last curve
Here she lies,
all broken and battered
after a night she will not soon forget.
Her lover in trouble and full of regret,
he now thinks they should of just watched the sunset.
Alas, they may still be here if it weren't
for his corvette.
Tiffany Smith’s timeline
- April 2024
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13 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2023
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18 SunReceived a critique
on the last curve from @Seren
"That is the joy of this workshop we help each other craft magnificent poetry. When I started here I was at best a middling poet. They have helped me so much and made me the poet I am today. Hugs I'm glad I could help th…" -
18 SunCritiqued
"A Poem Without Love..." by @Geezer
"that was beautiful. I could feel the love in it, thank you for sharing" -
17 SatReceived a critique
on the last curve from @Seren
"I think the first five lines stand on their own, but those two end lines have me confused, If she got her revenge? wouldn't it be "He" may still be here if it weren't for his corvette. Not "She" may still be here if it…" -
16 FriReceived a critique
on the last curve from @Entend2u
"She drove both of them both into a brick wall!! Great poem - brief and to the point - this is clearly your epitaph - sounds like you ought to write his as well." -
15 Thu
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15 ThuCritiqued
"Write a love poem without using the word love. A Girl and I. 2" by @Alex Tanner
"that was beautiful. I felt like i was there in the experience. loved the descriptions and detail you gave. I loved it." - May 2023
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29 Mon
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27 SatCritiqued
"Sunsets" by @Kelly Ann Wilson
"you gave me tears and a smile as it reminded me of my late husband and how hard life can sometimes be. Beautifully written and I'm new here so i have no wise words for you. I thought it was wonderful." -
27 SatCritiqued
"ECHOES " by @Ruby Lord
"I felt that. Aging and being a widower myself I am feeling emotional about this. Its very good and it flows beautifully. Thank you for sharing this." -
25 ThuReceived a critique
on A tribute to my MOTHER from @Geezer
"that you haven't shared with anyone before. I will assume that you have shared with some friends and family, but I am surprised that you haven't been coaxed into sharing on a poetry site. I am so glad that you chose us…" -
25 ThuReceived a critique
on A tribute to my MOTHER from @Geezer
"if I seemed rude. I didn't mean to. I guess I should have been more understanding about you being new here. Please accept my apologies. I think that I was upset that you didn't fix it when it was pointed out to you, bec…" -
25 ThuReceived a critique
on A tribute to my MOTHER from @Ruby Lord
"Hi Tiffany, I enjoyed your poem. You gave a lot of yourself in that poem, it feels personal and very touching. Language = The pronouns used, I, you, he, add emotional layers within the poem. Rhyme & Pattern = Your poem…" -
25 ThuNew follower
@Ruby Lord
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24 WedCritiqued
"Little Betty Thruppence" by @Ruby Lord
"this really flowed for me and was entertaining to read. thank you for the smiles." -
23 Tue
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23 Tue
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23 TueFirst critique offered
on "Raw Rhymes" by @Blue-eyed Bolla
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22 Mon
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18 ThuFirst publication
A tribute to my MOTHER
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18 Thu
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18 Thu
- April 2023
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13 ThuNew follower
@Rula
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13 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 35 days later.
About Me
I am a mother, grandmother and wife from Oregon. I am 51 years old and I have a dream to be published. I have spent the past 32 years raising my family and now I want to explore, what I have been told, is a talent of mine. I love to read, write and journal. I have been through a lot and I have a lot to say about my life and trials. I am hoping to learn from other poets and to sharpen my skills too.
Location: Oregon, United States, USA
I love Ullie Kaye. I feel like she gets right into my soul and puts a soothing salve upon it and its sadness. I feel like she can see into me and she gets it.
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Workshops
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| Navigating Neopoet: New Member Workshop | (syllabus) | Wading Pool | Started 2023-04-01 | Concluded |
| Navigating Neopoet: New Member Workshop | (syllabus) | Wading Pool | Started 2023-03-30 | Concluded |