stargirl

Member since December 7, 2011

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Posted Sep 29, 2013 · 24 lines · 2 critiques

CRASH!
the thunder went, lights are out
power shut.
We feel through the dark til we find each other.
I hear you breathing,
loudly
but steady. I
put my hand on your chest to feel your
rhythmically dancing heart.
I smell your skin and I am filled with the must of your cologne.
I drink in the silence as I stare into the abyss of darkness.
The hair on your neck raises as the soft wind goes by.
Lip to Lip we meet once again as if I have found my better half.
Sparks fly through me reigniting my heart that was once cold as stone

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but now is like the heart of a raging fire.
There I stand
holding you
you hold me close to your heart
while we stand underneath the now brightly shining stars.
The thoughts in my head dance to the heavenly tune of your heart and breath combined
My nightmares are drowned in your loves making me forget what pain and sorrow was.
I see the spectrum of light flash before my eyes as you caress my face between your warm hands.
"Hold me." I whisper.
"I would never let you go girl for we shine brighter the two of us than any star in the galaxy. no storm could break our bond.For I will never let you go."

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December 2021
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Anniversary
10 years of membership
December 2016
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Anniversary
5 years of membership
October 2013
04 Fri

Received a critique
on untitled from @weirdelf
"I read this poem completely wrongly and it is strong and beautiful. I must admit to be affected by your "Last Few Words" that is mo excuse for ignoring the power and beauty of it."
01 Tue

Received a critique
on untitled from @weirdelf
"it is a lessening of of self self love poem. Find your strength."
September 2013
29 Sun

Posted a poem
untitled
"CRASH!"
Open thread 24 lines
December 2012
07 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
February 2012
23 Thu

Received a critique
on THE RUNAWAY FILES ......CONTINUED. from @weirdelf
"It is intriguing and I want more."
21 Tue

Posted a poem
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"8:22 a.m."
Open thread 9 lines
December 2011
29 Thu

Posted a poem
ALIENS
"It is an outer world of mysteries"
Open thread 10 lines
27 Tue

First critique offered
on "LUCKLESS DAY" by @scribbler
24 Sat

First publication
THE RUNAWAY FILES
07 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 17 days later.

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i love to read, listen to music, shoot a bow, sing, dance, and play basketball!!!!!
Also my sis is emogothgirl(unfortunately) :(

Location: New York, U.S.

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Edgar Allen Poe

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