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stargirl
Member since December 7, 2011
Member for 14 years, 5 months
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CRASH!
the thunder went, lights are out
power shut.
We feel through the dark til we find each other.
I hear you breathing,
loudly
but steady. I
put my hand on your chest to feel your
rhythmically dancing heart.
I smell your skin and I am filled with the must of your cologne.
I drink in the silence as I stare into the abyss of darkness.
The hair on your neck raises as the soft wind goes by.
Lip to Lip we meet once again as if I have found my better half.
Sparks fly through me reigniting my heart that was once cold as stone
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but now is like the heart of a raging fire.
There I stand
holding you
you hold me close to your heart
while we stand underneath the now brightly shining stars.
The thoughts in my head dance to the heavenly tune of your heart and breath combined
My nightmares are drowned in your loves making me forget what pain and sorrow was.
I see the spectrum of light flash before my eyes as you caress my face between your warm hands.
"Hold me." I whisper.
"I would never let you go girl for we shine brighter the two of us than any star in the galaxy. no storm could break our bond.For I will never let you go."
stargirl’s timeline
- December 2021
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07 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2016
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07 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2013
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- September 2013
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29 Sun
- December 2012
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07 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2012
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23 ThuReceived a critique
on THE RUNAWAY FILES ......CONTINUED. from @weirdelf
"It is intriguing and I want more." -
22 Wed
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- December 2011
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31 SatReceived a critique
on ALIENS from @scribbler
"I would have sworn that I already commented on this poem. All one has to do is look around to be convinced that aliens are among us and most of them are in Congress lol. You might want to review the area 51 line…" -
30 FriReceived a critique
on ALIENS from @scribbler
"There are many among us who if not alien ought to be lol. Might want to proof read the area 51 line..................stan" -
30 FriReceived a critique
on ALIENS from @emogothgirl
"i thought you would do a great job with the runaway files! stick to your word dudette! anyways, it was a good idea. try rhyming, i think that would be more interesting. sis." -
30 FriCritiqued
"Irene Sure Was A Bitch!" by @emogothgirl
"emo, emo, emo, where can i start? it was kind of interesting . love ya!!!!!" -
29 Thu
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29 Thu
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27 TueCritiqued
"LUCKLESS DAY" by @scribbler
"i think this is a good poem! (funny too) :) sorry i accidentally saved two comments p.s. if you'd like to you can read my poem!" -
27 Tue
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27 TueFirst critique offered
on "LUCKLESS DAY" by @scribbler
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24 SatReceived a critique
on THE RUNAWAY FILES from @emogothgirl
"way to go sis! no critique cuz i'm the one who typed it. :) ;)" -
24 SatFirst publication
THE RUNAWAY FILES
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24 Sat
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19 MonNew follower
@emogothgirl
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07 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 17 days later.
About Me
About me
i love to read, listen to music, shoot a bow, sing, dance, and play basketball!!!!!
Also my sis is emogothgirl(unfortunately) :(
Location: New York, U.S.
Favorite Poets
Shakespeare
Edgar Allen Poe
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