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Member since February 19, 2007
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Οn your way
Going down
Don’t come around
Just a ghost town
Shut your eyes
Ignore the sound
Plastic funhouse
Always said
You knew this
From the start
Ride or die
Won’t ever break
My heart
But now
Your on
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Your way
Hear you have
a new past
That’s ok
The flame
Would burn out
Either way
You are
Better
With out me
spiro’s timeline
- March 2023
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31 FriReceived a critique
on Οn your way from @Rosewood Apothecary
"I liked the imagery created. The short lines have a nice timed delivery that reads like an interwoven collection of still frame images. Nice job Tim" -
27 MonReceived a critique
on Οn your way from @Geezer
"about plastic playhouse doesn't really jell and provide a cohesive thought behind the lines. "Of empty promises" would work very well here. A typo, with [your instead of you're] in the lines: "But now [You're] on Your w…" -
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- February 2022
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18 FriAnniversary
15 years of membership
- February 2017
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18 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- February 2012
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18 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2009
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07 SunReceived a critique
on and with my thoughts, an eternal disease, my lingering soul helps me breathe from @Pen Name
"I liked the poem.. I can see the confusion... I think u will like Longo's writes... do take a look Pen Name" -
07 Sun
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07 SunPosted a poem
and with my thoughts, an eternal disease, my lingering soul helps me breathe
"Why wonder why " - February 2008
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18 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2007
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18 SunJoined Neopoet
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