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spiro
Jun 07, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

and with my thoughts, an eternal disease, my lingering soul helps me breathe

Why wonder why 

This moonlit night

With earth and sky

And stars so bright

Why wonder why

O wonder boy

You’re wonderful

None can deny


— spiro, Jun 07, 2009
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spiro

I liked the poem.. I can see the confusion... I think u will like Longo's writes... do take a look Pen Name

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