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Shay Roberts
Member since August 4, 2026
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My heart is bleeding.
Can you see it?
Blood drips slowly
Pieces torn apart
Can you feel it?
It weighs heavily
Cracks rip apart
Can you hear it?
My eyes sweat
Only dry tears.
Can you touch it?
Shay
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- August 2026
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04 TueReceived a critique
on Gold from @alicespagnol7
"I have no idea how the title relate to the subject, I couldn't link it so maybe make that conection more explicit, it reads as obscure right now. You don't give us any context for the heart to be bleading, it also says…" -
04 TueReceived a critique
on Gold from @TheWanderer78
"The feelings the piece is trying to express are clear, but it's declaring them more than describing them. The emotions would be more poignant if you connected the reader to the sound of dripping blood, the feel of piece…" -
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04 TueFirst publication
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04 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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About me
I have been through quite a bit of crap. I write to get it out and let it go. I am 60 years old. Live a quite daily life in a small town in Oregon, USA. I have a fish named Red. Hope to get more soon.
Location: USA
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