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Shashwat Patel
Member since August 5, 2026
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The Dark Inside
Every human has a side which they will always hide, why don't they show their true self, maybe they could get some help.
Their pure love lives here, Their true fear sleeps there, Only they know what secrets they keep, crying nights they couldn't sleep.
Try to know someone's dark inside, You will find the beauty they hide, No one is born with heart of evil, Only few know someone's true will.
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- August 2026
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06 ThuReceived a critique
on The Dark Inside from @EyeAmI
"This is the type of subject that I like wrestling with. The darkness, and the light within all humans. The only thing I’d say could be improved is the rhymes, some of them seem slant, and some more precise. Keep at it…" -
05 WedCritiqued
"Pain" by @JJBerg3092
"If pain was human, he would fall in love with his piece. Amazing work. Some points to improve :- Try to balance the syllables, it's really difficult I know that, but try as much as you can." -
05 WedFirst critique offered
on "Pain" by @JJBerg3092
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05 WedFirst publication
The Dark Inside
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05 WedPosted a poem
The Dark Inside
"Every human has a side which they will always hide, why don't they show their true self, maybe they could get some help." -
05 WedJoined Neopoet
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About Me
About me
I am doing poetry for more than 4 years, still I feel I need to learn more.
My main theme is highly is philosophical, imaginative and metaphorical.
Location: IND
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