S.G. Blue

Member since February 6, 2013

Member for 13 years, 3 months

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Like this.

Posted Jun 4, 2013 · 9 lines · 2 critiques

This.
And that you love me.
Even just that you are.

That you see softness and then it is.
That you lay down and I sleep.
That you are happy and so, I am.

You are.
And that you love me.
Like this.

S.G. Blue’s timeline

February 2023
06 Mon

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2018
06 Tue

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2014
06 Thu

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2013
05 Wed

Received a critique
on Like this. from @weirdelf
"I don't feel the ring of truth in this poem. There is some depth missing. Only you can tell us what it is."
04 Tue

Received a critique
on Like this. from @Shyanne18
"I think this poem is unique. I like the language. I do feel that is unfinished. Perhaps this work has something more to say..? Shyanne"
04 Tue

Posted a poem
Like this.
"This."
Open thread 9 lines
May 2013
19 Sun

Received a critique
on Morning from @Rula
"Nice lightsome piece. I loved the first stanza best But when I came to the second I was puzzled with your use of "be" instead of "is". It really sounds archaic in such a modern piece. But maybe that's only me I've enjoy…"
19 Sun

Posted a poem
Morning
"No matter the vibrant or rain soaked things"
Open thread 13 lines
April 2013
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Alcatraz Woman from @Ross Hamilton Hill
"I can understand how close this is to you, but you are taking my crits of the poem as crits of your experience, the two are different, questioning the poem is not questioning your experience , how it effected you or the…"
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Leaning Over from @Ross Hamilton Hill
"I reread your poem and I don't want you to think that my crit was just uniformed praise, so here are a few nits , I guess I was a bit over the top in my first comment (mistakenly posted twice) I still think it's a very…"
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Leaning Over from @weirdelf
"I look forward to it."
18 Thu

Received a critique
on Leaning Over from @Ross Hamilton Hill
"this is quite special, the sonics, the power of expression and the subtle rhymes ( except the last rest/nest which is traditional but I like 'nest'). This is as good as poetry gets."
18 Thu

Received a critique
on Leaning Over from @Ross Hamilton Hill
"this is quite special, the sonics, the power of expression and the subtle rhymes ( except the last rest/nest which is traditional but I like 'nest'). This is as good as poetry gets."
11 Thu

Posted a poem
Alcatraz Woman
"Blue glass tiles measure dignity"
Open thread 25 lines
06 Sat

Posted a poem
Leaning Over
"Filling me up until my hands shake on the ends of these thin arms."
Open thread 10 lines
February 2013
17 Sun

Posted a poem
Vodka on Ice
"Exhale."
Open thread 39 lines
16 Sat

Posted a poem
I look up and He
"I look up and then He."
Open thread 60 lines
15 Fri

Highest posting month
February 2013 — 6 poems
14 Thu

Posted a poem
Untitled
"A ship upon my woman waters"
Open thread 14 lines
13 Wed

Critiqued
"Sonnet XVII - Pablo Neruda (Great Poetry Workshop)" by @Seren
"This is my favorite poem of all time. I especially love reading in it's original Spanish. So beautiful."
12 Tue

Posted a poem
Cello Curves
"I close my eyes to see that magnificent curve of woman running from hip through waist."
Open thread 52 lines
12 Tue

Critiqued
"my feet are loved. A poem inspired by a fellow Blue Canadian" by @loved
"it took a little while but I've kicked the flu's ass...I'm sure the poetry helped :)"
11 Mon

Posted a poem
Prayer for a Sunday
"Your eyes glowing in city rain sidewalk night speak love to me."
Open thread 38 lines
10 Sun

Critiqued
"UNTITLED" by @Geremia
"Sad and romantic. Beautifully simple."
07 Thu

Critiqued
"my feet are loved. A poem inspired by a fellow Blue Canadian" by @loved
";) I did read this when you left it as a comment to my poem and I smiled. Tried to come up words to say when a poem is written because of poem I wrote. The night and flu I've been in bed with for 2 days, prevented me fr…"
07 Thu

Critiqued
"heart murmur" by @ephraimcrud
"I almost choked on my tea. But I was smiling as I wiped it from my chin. I still am."
07 Thu

Critiqued
"Photosynthesis " by @Beauregard
"Beautiful. I love when a verb and a noun don't quite...and yet, they really do. It creates a lovely moment in which the reader has pause and wrap her head around it. Simple wordplay that creates a great poetic picture m…"
07 Thu

First critique offered
on "Photosynthesis " (since unpublished) by @Beauregard
06 Wed

First publication
WATER
06 Wed

Most-discussed work
WATER

11 critiques to date.
06 Wed

Posted a poem
WATER
"Some days I soak my feet in your shallow cool water"
Open thread 55 lines
06 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.