S.G. Blue

Member since February 6, 2013

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Like this.

Posted Jun 4, 2013 · 9 lines · 2 critiques

This.
And that you love me.
Even just that you are.

That you see softness and then it is.
That you lay down and I sleep.
That you are happy and so, I am.

You are.
And that you love me.
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February 2023
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10 years of membership
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February 2014
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One year of membership
June 2013
05 Wed

Received a critique
on Like this. from @weirdelf
"I don't feel the ring of truth in this poem. There is some depth missing. Only you can tell us what it is."
04 Tue

Received a critique
on Like this. from @Shyanne18
"I think this poem is unique. I like the language. I do feel that is unfinished. Perhaps this work has something more to say..? Shyanne"
04 Tue

Posted a poem
Like this.
"This."
Open thread 9 lines
May 2013
19 Sun

Received a critique
on Morning from @Rula
"Nice lightsome piece. I loved the first stanza best But when I came to the second I was puzzled with your use of "be" instead of "is". It really sounds archaic in such a modern piece. But maybe that's only me I've enjoy…"
19 Sun

Posted a poem
Morning
"No matter the vibrant or rain soaked things"
Open thread 13 lines
April 2013
11 Thu

Posted a poem
Alcatraz Woman
"Blue glass tiles measure dignity"
Open thread 25 lines
February 2013
15 Fri

Highest posting month
February 2013 — 6 poems
07 Thu

First critique offered
on "Photosynthesis " (since unpublished) by @Beauregard
06 Wed

First publication
WATER
06 Wed

Most-discussed work
WATER

11 critiques to date.
06 Wed

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.