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renae miller
Member since February 4, 2022
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A Meal
when you see me
do you see a delicacy?
or just measly slop for you to consume?
is your grovel some starving man’s desperate plea to get a taste?
or are you really even hungry?
a stomach larger than your eyes which is strange considering yours are so wide, fixated on me
In some ways I feel like a gorgeous pig
flattered by your admiration but living in fear of the slaughter that will surely come
you will trick me into a room waiting with your fork ready to consume
and when your hunger is satiated what will you do?
will you continue to gorge and gorge and gorge?
or will you mourn?
will you mourn the place I once held in your mind and regret you ever tasted me in the first place?
You never slow before making yourself sick. Yet I give until every inch of my bones have been licked clean
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may I plead?
that you take your time with me
take your time to relish in my flavors
and all the things that make me delectable
will you please?
see me as a delicacy.
renae miller’s timeline
- July 2026
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- March 2026
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05 ThuPosted a poem
Role play
"They say we accept the love we think we deserve. l know What love I deserve. I Want someone to accept the kindness I have to offer and, in turn, give it back." - August 2025
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29 FriReceived a critique
on Give Them Mercy from @Geezer
"the statement of: "I still do" seems contrary to the lines of: "now I crush them without flinching and I kill them without crying." I would delete that line and continue with, I'm trying to remember how to love again gi…" -
29 FriReceived a critique
on Give Them Mercy from @Lavender
"Hello, Ranae, The honesty is so raw... I understood this on all levels. I, too, was taught to hate through the world, my country, and my religion. It takes a daily affirmation to remember how to love and show mercy. Tha…" -
29 FriReceived a critique
on Give Them Mercy from @Ray Miller
"Good poem. the world taught me to hate the world taught me to hate religion taught me to hate Maybe you don't need the first 2 lines, likewise with my country taught me..." -
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- May 2023
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14 SunReceived a critique
on Am Lost but Once was Found from @Obadiah Grey
"This is great, seriously good!! Jeyzus wept you're nineteen? you'll be marvellous by twenty. Obi." -
14 SunReceived a critique
on Am Lost but Once was Found from @Lavender
"I agree with AI - this has a lasting impression. Bless your heart. Keep writing! Keep writing! L" -
14 SunPosted a poem
Am Lost but Once was Found
"There are roads I once drove as a girl. Screaming my head off, hair flailing in the wind, hanging out a jeep window." - April 2023
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15 SatReceived a critique
on Things I Don’t Speak About from @RoseBlack
"Welcome to Neopoet! This an honest, emotive write, in which I resonate with deeply. There is so much strength and power in self-reflection and I think you have conveyed this throughout your poem. Well done." -
15 SatReceived a critique
on Things I Don’t Speak About from @Candlewitch
"welcome to Neopoet, I am glad to meet you! you have written a powerful poem. the only fault I find is in the structure in the first set. try this instead: If melancholy was an ocean, I’d be drowning, with names of forgo…" -
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- February 2023
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04 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2022
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22 MonPosted a poem
the rights and wrongs of generations
"Sometimes I wonder about the choices of right and wrong. So many times are we told to pick the right choice even if it's not the decision we desire. Well the problem at hand is that what I desire is usually "wrong". Perhaps why I can give in and justify my self diagnoses of being a "bad person". But what is right and wrong? Who decides that? Sometimes people can make a wrong choice but in the end, it turn out right. My grandmother cheated on my grandpa and had my father. It is wrong, because she deceived, and in turn destroyed a whole line of full blooded lineage that could have existed. On the other hand, it is right. Because here I am. Alive and able to have made my presence in the family as strong as one could with just water. Sometimes I wonder if the way my life is, happens to be because of my grandmother's choice. "The daughter of a bastard son cursed to reap the sins of the one who lay it upon her years ago." That could just be me though. I do always make the wrong decision." -
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- February 2022
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04 FriFirst publication
pornstar or whiskey
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04 Fri
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04 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
In my early 20’s on my own. Just being a girl figuring it out.
Location: Texas
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Role play
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Am Lost but Once was Found
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Things I Don’t Speak About
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To My First Teacher
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pornstar or whiskey
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