Obadiah Grey

Member since October 18, 2016

Member for 9 years, 7 months

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125 Poems

811 Comments

12 Followers

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Bugger.

Posted Jan 3, 2026 · 9 lines · 3 critiques

Would you care to buy our house?
It's minus mouse n devoid o' louse,!
spiders, roaches, bugs or other
have all been eaten by my brother,
snaffled up n swallowed down
then jus' crapped out a - yellowish brown.

so would you care to buy our house?
from an oddly pair -- devoid o' nous.

Obi.

Obadiah Grey’s timeline

April 2026
26 Sun

Received a critique
on Bugger. from @crypticbard
"If only all property on the market were such!"
January 2026
06 Tue

Received a critique
on Bugger. from @Lavender
"Hello, Obi! Sold! Just clean up that yellowish-brown stuff, please... Really enjoyed this one - charming in its witty way. Thank you! L"
03 Sat

Posted a poem
Bugger.
"Would you care to buy our house?"
Open thread 9 lines
December 2025
29 Mon

Received a critique
on Festive Senryū from @Lavender
"Hello, Obi, Great imagery. I see it all! Happy holidays! L"
24 Wed

Posted a poem
Festive Senryū
"a coddling of eggs"
Open thread 4 lines
July 2023
24 Mon

Posted a poem
" Aberfan"
"Aberfan."
Open thread 16 lines
October 2021
18 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
July 2021
23 Fri

Most-discussed work
Bladder stones.

21 critiques to date.
October 2017
18 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
November 2016
11 Fri

First critique offered
on "Sticks and stones" by @jane210660
October 2016
21 Fri

First publication
Aberfan. (since unpublished)
18 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 2 days later.