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Geremia
Geremia
Jul 18, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Madagascar Dreams

Madagascar Dreams

 

Triangles white

Floating in moonlight

On waters glass

Blue indigo

Mornings burning

Stillness

Crimson read

Afternoons of sunlight

Brutal and unrelenting

Dancing silver streams

On aquamarine

Life and motion

Born again in tropical winds

On eastern shoes of the Indian Ocean

 

Madagascar dreams

Far from prison’s mind

Madagascar days

Far from the world I know

Madagascar ways

Melting into One

Senses numbed in opiate reality

A place far

Where death w ill never

Find me…

 

— Geremia, Jul 18, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

Opiate reality, the essence of all that you love.

Ann of Norway Opiate reality:- Oh so wonderful, you forge the colours of Madagascar, so scintillating, so intensely aquamarine, shining its potent reflections deep into the heart of you, where the life threads are set alight and will never cease their opiate musical kaleidoscope forever you will turn and turn into the ether of existence and live for ever in it. Annuccia
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poewriter58

16 years ago

Longo

Did you mean to say crimson read or crimson red? Oh I want to go there . Wonderfully descriptive, you made me see it poewriter58 Special Events Director Come to our chat rooms and be rewarded

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