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Geremia
Geremia
Jul 17, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

THE PROMETHEUS FACTOR

THE PROMETHEUS  FACTOR

 

I ride the Wind

With fury bold

On steeds of steel

Across a universe

Unknown

Rage
Crimson red and indigo

In

Brooding black midnight

Cold and unforgiving

I own my pain

Hold the reins of my being

And

Delight in my suffering

For I am Humanity

A perfect imperfection

I am Earth, Water, Fire

Air

Existence

Annihilation

Everything

Nothing

And

My Flame will seer

Infinity

Like no other

 

— Geremia, Jul 17, 2010

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Geremia

Geremia

15 years 10 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaDon’t

J.B. Longo-Geremia Don't just live the moment, transubstantiate it. P.S. How the hell do get my pic back on here. Much too good to waste:) {I'm shy}
Esker

Esker

15 years 10 months ago

Great writing

lovely quiet weekend there is something about a morning all to oneself while the house sleeps no coffee yet but thats okay some reading of good solid poetry as yours gives me is enough jolt Esker~
M

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Wonderful

Sentiments and choice of words with much thought and spirit here in your write Longo. I hope soon to see your face on here again so yes get that pic back up soon. I missed it. Just try to download it again and paste it to page. Missing you and wishing you much love Bella Mona Magics xoxoxox
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 10 months ago

Oh you charging dark horse Longobardolino

Ann of Norway Charging through the vicissitudes of life, through the depths of murky night hours, into the fiery furnace of your woes, earth, colours, flames sparked from your steel hooved beasts, what a wondrous sight you make across my evening sky. Your Annuccia.