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Jul 16, 2010
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SOMETHING STRANGE
SOMETHING STRANGE
something strange
has taken away
my ground
my heart beats slowly
now
my spirit wills
nothing more
my dreams have grown cold
my visions unclear
my hopes languish
in fantasy’s failure
lost
in a mist colorless
i wander aimlessly
in disillusion and fear
something strange is coming
this way
something strange
has taken hold of me
something stranely familiar
is comng my way
— Geremia, Jul 16, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years ago
Life and death are old
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest You
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Dearest Longo
Lonnie
16 years ago
Bravo for Bravery!
magics02
16 years ago
Longo dearest of friends here
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
A big sigh.
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