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Jul 02, 2010
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Per Mari [in English] Rewritten
Per mari….
[Through seas: dedicated to my grand parents who brought my soul to America]
On ships through many seas
I sail seeking my destiny
Searching for a better way
All I love and know
I leave behind
Never to return again
To the ends
Of this earth I will go
Sick in my heart
Sad in my soul
Alone
On ships through to places unknown
I sail seeking my destiny….
— Geremia, Jul 02, 2010
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shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Beautiful Longo!
Geremia
15 years 11 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaSì, tu mi
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Da vero!
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Joe,Hugs of love from
Geremia
15 years 11 months ago
To all
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
I agree, wonderful. Can you
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
This is not a positive poem.
Geremia
15 years 11 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaAnuccia, I
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
Capito veramente!