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Jul 02, 2010
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Per Mari [in English] Rewritten
Per mari….
[Through seas: dedicated to my grand parents who brought my soul to America]
On ships through many seas
I sail seeking my destiny
Searching for a better way
All I love and know
I leave behind
Never to return again
To the ends
Of this earth I will go
Sick in my heart
Sad in my soul
Alone
On ships through to places unknown
I sail seeking my destiny….
— Geremia, Jul 02, 2010
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shirley harrison
16 years ago
Beautiful Longo!
Geremia
16 years ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaSì, tu mi
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Da vero!
Kailashana
16 years ago
Hi Joe,Hugs of love from
Geremia
16 years ago
To all
raskin
16 years ago
I agree, wonderful. Can you
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
This is not a positive poem.
Geremia
16 years ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaAnuccia, I
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Capito veramente!
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