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Geremia
Geremia
Jun 30, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Oocean and Me

 

Ocean and Me

 

I stood

Alone

In pitch of night

Along a sandy shore

Listening quietly

To Ocean’s waters in phantom whispers

Speak

Lost somewhere on Horizon’s edge

Black and deep

 

I saw no diamonds in a hidden sky

No signs of God’s touch

No angels wings fluttering

In secret congregation

No such holy machinations

To fill an empty Soul

Childish dreams and fantasies

All

 

I stood

Along a sandy shore

In the pitch of night

Alone together

In Mystery

Just Ocean and Me

 

— Geremia, Jun 30, 2010

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Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Joe

I loved you poem there is a poignant silent darkness my friend only thing I actually have a suggestion, but that last line ? i was going to suggest 'the ocean and me' just an idea if you dont like ignore me ;)lol love and big hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Geremia

Geremia

15 years 11 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you, my Jayne. The change would destroy the perdonifcaton of Ocean as a sharain, conscious entity i n the universe sharing the mystery of "existence" in all its natural forms.