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Jun 27, 2010
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CYCLER
I am just a tiny seep
out of stony ground I weep
Beside a rotted chestnut log
just enough to form a bog
Trickling down I join a neighbor
And we combine our downhill labor
together we now form a spring
listen close,you'll hear us sing
My voyage now describes a hollow
over rocks my riffles follow
now this spring marries another
each adding its flow to the other
I've now become a babbling brook
and taken on a whole new look
now my pools contain small fishes
among flat stones shaped like dishes
The farther from my source I flow
the larger I become and so
with more additions I'm a stream
as pretty as in any dream
Add more infusions,now a creek
an ever lower path I seek
my journey to the distant sea
takes on much more urgency
Cutting now through field and glade
within the bed that I have made
I twist around, attempt to find
another creek thats of like mind
At last another one I join
different sides of similar coin
our strength now forms a mighty river
which when in flood makes levees quiver
The final stretch is now in sight
the sky is clear, the sun is bright
I'm now a part of the great sea
the way that I was meant to be
Sun's heat draws my moisture out
forming clouds which take a route
to mountain range so far away
the trip takes much more than a day
The clouds now drop me as soft rain
until I hit the ground again
and soak into the ground real deep
emerging as a tiny seep
out of stony ground I weep
Beside a rotted chestnut log
just enough to form a bog
Trickling down I join a neighbor
And we combine our downhill labor
together we now form a spring
listen close,you'll hear us sing
My voyage now describes a hollow
over rocks my riffles follow
now this spring marries another
each adding its flow to the other
I've now become a babbling brook
and taken on a whole new look
now my pools contain small fishes
among flat stones shaped like dishes
The farther from my source I flow
the larger I become and so
with more additions I'm a stream
as pretty as in any dream
Add more infusions,now a creek
an ever lower path I seek
my journey to the distant sea
takes on much more urgency
Cutting now through field and glade
within the bed that I have made
I twist around, attempt to find
another creek thats of like mind
At last another one I join
different sides of similar coin
our strength now forms a mighty river
which when in flood makes levees quiver
The final stretch is now in sight
the sky is clear, the sun is bright
I'm now a part of the great sea
the way that I was meant to be
Sun's heat draws my moisture out
forming clouds which take a route
to mountain range so far away
the trip takes much more than a day
The clouds now drop me as soft rain
until I hit the ground again
and soak into the ground real deep
emerging as a tiny seep
— scribbler, Jun 27, 2010
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Breakinglogic
15 years 11 months ago
scribbler, Great cycler :) I
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
cycler
poewriter58
15 years 11 months ago
Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
cycler
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
This is brilliant
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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lou
15 years 11 months ago
Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
seep
mand
15 years 11 months ago
Clever poem describing the
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
cycler
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Scribbler
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Now I know ive been slack I
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
You just keep on amazing me!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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