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Jun 24, 2010
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Mother Love
Mother Love
Soaring on the winds of life
Above the seas of sorrow
I gaze upon the distant past
And touch upon the 'morrow
Lives and loves I left behind
To those that lie ahead
Restless dreams of future times
Haunted by those now dead
Stars that fade into the day
As you bathe within its light
Until the day once more fades
And you plunge into the night
The moonlit dreams of yesteryear
Like movies on a screen
Carressed by flickering candlelight
That lends a silken sheen
Float now upon the gentle waves
Of this mother we call earth
Until with heaving shudders
She brings you forth in birth
Soaring on the winds of life
Above the seas of sorrow
I gaze upon the distant past
And touch upon the 'morrow
Lives and loves I left behind
To those that lie ahead
Restless dreams of future times
Haunted by those now dead
Stars that fade into the day
As you bathe within its light
Until the day once more fades
And you plunge into the night
The moonlit dreams of yesteryear
Like movies on a screen
Carressed by flickering candlelight
That lends a silken sheen
Float now upon the gentle waves
Of this mother we call earth
Until with heaving shudders
She brings you forth in birth
— Rett, Jun 24, 2010
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raskin
16 years 1 month ago
That last passage is
Rett
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Wow good one here for sure thank you
Rett
16 years 1 month ago
Mona, many thanks
Lil Z
16 years 1 month ago
Amazing!
Rett
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you lil Z
poewriter58
16 years 1 month ago
Rett
Rett
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Chrys
tbeaudet
16 years 1 month ago
Top Quality
Rett
16 years 1 month ago
Many thanks Tom
xena465
16 years ago
Gee, how wonderful
Rett
16 years ago
Thank you Xena
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Rett
Rett
16 years ago
Thank you Jayne
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