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Jun 21, 2010
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Evil Emancipation
Evil Emancipation
Flesh that is oozing corruption
melts from the sin of my bones
flowing without interruption
into a darkness unkown
Nightmares are dreams of the living
seen through the eyes of the dead
fantasies quite unforgiving
that crawl through the cave of my head
Screams that erupted from laughter
echo forever in time
odes to despair and disaster
chanted in meter and rhyme
Here, on the threshold of madness,
I sink into pits of despair
driven by torment and sadness
no prayers can dispel or repair
Unleashing the demon within me,
I drink from the blood of it's hate
seeing my soul resolutely
arise to embrace it's true fate
C. Lon R. Bruso
Flesh that is oozing corruption
melts from the sin of my bones
flowing without interruption
into a darkness unkown
Nightmares are dreams of the living
seen through the eyes of the dead
fantasies quite unforgiving
that crawl through the cave of my head
Screams that erupted from laughter
echo forever in time
odes to despair and disaster
chanted in meter and rhyme
Here, on the threshold of madness,
I sink into pits of despair
driven by torment and sadness
no prayers can dispel or repair
Unleashing the demon within me,
I drink from the blood of it's hate
seeing my soul resolutely
arise to embrace it's true fate
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jun 21, 2010
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Critiques
jetz
16 years 1 month ago
This is awesome. Your rhythm
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Many thanks, Sue!
Lil Z
16 years 1 month ago
This is amazing
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Lil Z!
Roscoe Lane
16 years 1 month ago
Lonnie,
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you Roscoe!
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Fab Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Xena!
poewriter58
16 years 1 month ago
Lon
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, M'Dear!
Tonya Greenlee
16 years 1 month ago
Now Lonnie,
Tonya Greenlee
16 years 1 month ago
p.s.
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Tonya!
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
evil
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Scribbler!
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
The flow in this ones superb
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Jaycee!
mand
16 years 1 month ago
What can I say, I agree with
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Mand!
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Judy!
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
he was a world war 11 poet lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Wow!!!
diana duncan
16 years 1 month ago
Good came out of Evil
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Diana!
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
The brilliance of you!
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Shirley!
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 1 month ago
Made me pause only once was this your intent?
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Hmmm! Not sure, Sinbad!
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 1 month ago
I enjoyed the whole Poem Lonnie and I push the (+) button also
Shayla rae
16 years 1 month ago
wow, great poem. the rythm
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Shayla Rae!
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
my suggestions on a usually
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Anna!
Rett
16 years 1 month ago
Lonnie, what can I say?
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Rett!
Geezer
16 years 1 month ago
Glad to see ya ...
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Geezer!
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
wow
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Green Eyes!
Breakinglogic
16 years 1 month ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, logic!
Noirjente
16 years 1 month ago
!!!!!
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