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Jun 16, 2010
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Into Blue Horizon
INTO BLUE HORIZON
I feel the strangeness
Of a sleep
Deep and unforgiving
The flesh that I am
Waning like a burning Sun
Sinking crimson
Deeper still
Into blue Horizon
My secret soul hiding in fear
Of its own immortality
Knowing
The coming of that time
Is near
Circuits shutting down
One by one
Energy palpitating rhythms
Steady and slow
The glow of sunrise
In my eyes shining dim
Wishes yet unfulfilled
But
Needing to give in
To this sleep
Deep and unforgiving
— Geremia, Jun 16, 2010
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Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
So beautiful your mind despite your affliction.