Rereat

smooth. I never lost grasp of each lines intention. theme, flow, conciseness, all impeccable. however, I am wondering about the lines 'no care ' 'what they say 'I wanted to, and did, read it as 'Not caring what they say'. What say you to this? drop me a line if you care to repond . this is one of my favorites since joining NeoPoets. regards, AL

it is nice that you have found solace by expressing your inner thoughts through the medium of poetry as you have done in this reflective write "Retreat"... raj (sublime_ocean)

it's me again. I forgot the stars the first time, and the nomination button. I rarely use them

Ann of Norway Very very very fine,  very moving and beautiful Logobardolino, in the beauty, the stark white beauty of silence, you meditate, you sense and feel the essence of yourself,  you plumb the depths of reason, the functioning of the brain,  you search the levels of existence, hear them speak, albeit in the silence you repeat, and you repeat, until the traces of the thoughts they dissipate and the total silence of the mind,  remains as if forgotten, left behind.  Yes you have written a masterpiece again, of such  a special quality, if you cannot tap the elements  for gods and goddesses, spectres and dreams,  you find the wholeness of being still, and then can fill with ALL the all that is existence undescribed as yet, you bard, you man, you scribe, you poet. I can sense and feel the visions and the thoughts you have,  the dreams half recognised that float beside you, lift your eyes,  I do, I do I feel it too, just like you, and yet I have no fear of  terror, dread of coming things like you, I can identify with you. Your Annuccia. 

Bravo my Longo as I do the same, no need for all the chatter and clatter in the brain as silence is all I need and care for as I too walk in the breaths of life. You did Magnifico here my friend I share this piece with you also, Love and Peace to you Mona xxxoxox

the best retreat of all - within ourselves. love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

wonderful words, perfect poem i love my own company! shirley harrison