Geezer

Jun 07, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Eye See You...

Once upon a time, there was a man named Spike

He said; " No matter who the gal, I can find a thing to like".

Her eyes might be, pools of love

She could have a most lovely booty

But there ain't one that I know of

That ain't some kind of cutie

She might be, a tall and lanky gal

Or short, with chunky thighs

The kind that, more men want as pals

But gaze into her eyes...

If you don't see the want and need

Heart bursting full of love

Maybe you should plant a seed

In your head above

Think about it, carefully...

I think that you will see

The eye of the beholder

Determines truest beauty

— Geezer, Jun 07, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Critiques

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

Oh Sir Geezer, Sir Geezer I like this one!!

Ann of Norway You show her off from left to right she sometimes presents us with a sight of all her funny attributes and take all men as silly mutes, or are they just as giddy in their gait, and leave it all when its too late. Yes I like this it titivates the mind and creates so many amusing visions that I was thoroughly entertained by it; yes if he court jester falls ill, I shall know who to send for. Your Queenie, Ann. It even reminds me of Pyramus and Thisbe in the "Midsummer Night's Dream" Willy Shakespeare.

Geezer

15 years 12 months ago

I think I would...

call it free verse, but I'm not really sure of how to classify it. Just glad you liked it. It started out out as one thing, and wound up being something else. Hence the comment that it was a couple of ideas put together and slid side-ways. Love ya, NW ~ Gee

Breakinglogic

16 years ago

:) Hey Geez, no matter what

:) Hey Geez, no matter what you write, I can find a thing to like. This one is over the rainbow great :) Title, I think was fitting. The pacing was natural. Peace and cheers logic

Geezer

15 years 12 months ago

Over the rainbow...

Thank you for answering my questions about the title, and the pacing. I kinda thought that maybe the title should have been something like "Second Thoughts" but felt the second one "Eye See You" was better. Thanks, for the read, and compliment, ~ Gee

scribbler

16 years ago

see you

Nom. for truth of read.People who say they can't find love are often really looking for lovely.regards....scribbler

Geezer

15 years 12 months ago

So true...

The bloom of youth so often just looks for beauty of the skin, and no deeper. Thanks for the read and comment. ~ Gee

DawningDaytripper

16 years ago

I loved your freewheeling

I loved your freewheeling flirty write Gee, And I have a have a feeling all those girls can find something to like with you! I know I do! Love ya bunchs Gee Man! Julie D.D.

Geezer

15 years 12 months ago

It must be...

my beautiful mind! LOL Thanks D.D. I knew you would like it! It truly started out much different, than it ended. Love ya, ~ Gee

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dearest Gee

Your writing of late has been superlative ... well done Bow love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Geezer

15 years 12 months ago

I think...

It must be all these foriegn influences I have taken up with lately, Australian, Japanese, Russian, especially that "Panin dude". Ivan, I think his name is. Love and hugs, higgest bugs, ~ Gee

lou

15 years 12 months ago

GEE

Beauty certainly is in the eye of the beholder. love lou xx