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When Angels Laugh

 

WHEN ANGELS LAUGH

 

Angels laugh when they see
This sorrowful humanity
Begin to fall
Grow weak
And
Disintegrate
At a slow and steady rate
Grounded by gravity to  sleep eternity

 And God sings

 But
Humans can do what Angels cannot
Feel the pains and pleasures of the flesh
Know what it is to be alive
In all its joys
In all its fury
Its suffering and ecstasy
Feel a soul bursting to be free
Know  mortality

Creators of our own creation
We die in body
Live again in Energy
Fire in the universe
Splendor of a shooting star
Sprit in a whirling wind
Beginnings with no end

It is then angels cry
And God sings
Again

— Geremia, Jun 05, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Joe

I dont know why but your poem brought me undone ... Creators of our own creation We die in body Live again in Energy Fire in the universe Splendor of a shooting star Sprit in a whirling wind Beginnings with no and It is then angels cry And God sings Again I love that ending my friend ... sorry emotional today, gotta love us bitches with heart ;)lol ... thanks for being you Joe ... brilliant poem nominated all the way love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Geremia

Geremia

16 years ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you my Jayne. Women are and always have been stronger than us men. Love to you and yurs. I do understand. joe
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

beautiful longo

i wish i could nominate twice love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html