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God's Middle Finger an edit

God’s Middle Finger GodHas given me that goddamnedMiddle FingerAgainHere I thought he was DeadAndThe dread I faced was my ownValiently I foughtThe unyielding onslaught of the Furies’RageGaining traction on the slippery roadOf my BeingEngaged in life’s delightsNot seeingThe sink hole aheadIt’s like getting your  genitaliaNot so gently slammed in a steel doorA screaming face dropping to the floorThinkingWe will never be able to do”it”AnymoreYet we all rise to the occasion In the  endAs we must bend allTo  Life’s strange TerpsichoreAndDance to a music not of our choiceStillShouting as loud as we canWith  a stronger  voiceUntil the next fall
 EPILOGUEOmmOmmmOmmmm
— Geremia, Jun 04, 2010

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Jonesk21b

16 years ago

Liked it

Awesome write. Getting your genetalia slammed not so gently by a steel door! haha
Geremia

Geremia

16 years ago

Thanks

J.B. Longo-Geremia It do hurt! :) Joe
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Joe

Rotflmfao ... you know how much I love your writes but this ?? just near made me wet myself lol naughty naughty man ... I will crit again later when I have collected myself lol Nominated love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

*Hommmmy don’t play

*Hommmmy don't play that". You do know don't you God is Homer Simpson. ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

Oh wow!

Ann of Norway I haven't seen this one till now, just owowowowo. So 'safty', so 'scintillatingly 'sensuelt', so hmmmmmmdinger, dangling ditties, dutifully drastic and so 'superlativo Longobardolino, with your 'fiolino!!!' The dining room door is still swinging from the breeze of your words, and the curtains have fallen from their hooks; the river has found a new course. and of course you have taken on a new look, I dig it Longobardolino, I do I do!!! Annuccia in tatters! And what subtle connotations here oh so so so subtle you are you wizard of words, you dangerously wonderful midnight rider of the stallions fiery red mane.