loved

May 31, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

You DO love YouR loneliness

That you rarely visit us

I perhaps have sent you

So many messages
my friend

Wish’d you reply

Some day

One and all

I know loneliness

Makes one want

Surges of emotion

It does ensure,

But loneliness
is a matter of curse

Twas, is, as twill be

Now as ever before...

Get out of your self imposed shell

Come abide with all

Howsoever,
big or small

Love is in the air

Where’s the need
of your solitary call?

— loved, May 31, 2010

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Critiques

loved

16 years ago

thanks a great deal

.. i move onwards day by day each day i take a step forwards ere i reach my final grave i'm brave poetry i wave at all those who do me save praise praise praise never from ur memory me ever erase

loved

16 years ago

thanks

Thanks for the instant spotlight, I wonder who made me do it Thanks to you all Who shall contribute? Your might and keep me With-in reach of your sight

Marie-I-Be

16 years ago

Huh.

You have given yourself five stars for this? Mysterious. Don't see that every day.

loved

16 years ago

mysterious yes

...yes that's what i am hence the five stars couldn't remove it since u havent given any perhaps it will compensate thanks for the lovely observationand ur time too

xena465

16 years ago

Nice Loved

I know loneliness so very well, but for some of us it part of every day life and we get used to it. Rosina xena465

loved

16 years ago

glad u commented

...one needs a larger base of friends to comment and say more about a poem here folks just visit and move on

xena465

16 years ago

I agree Loved

But, I've tried to get more people involved and comment, alas so few are interested. Just look at the Stream of poems in general; there are hardly any comments...any ideas? Rosina xena465

hippiepoet69

16 years ago

it has inspired countless poems. Kept me up countless nights when I have to work the next day. Kept me from spending time with family and friends. Yes I know loneliness well. But hopefully that is over for me. I better get offline where I can call her. Take Care.

loved

16 years ago

grateful

...thanks for ur lovely comments

Breakinglogic

16 years ago

Good write here loved,

Good write here loved, loneliness... How time consuming it can be, if only loneliness didn't demand so much company. Everyone at some point stops by :( some lose sight of the front door Well paced, very much you, great job :) peace an cheers, logic

loved

16 years ago

grateful

...i survive on smaller mercies one can be in company yet lonely too

Kailashana

16 years ago

Indeed. In the grand scheme

Indeed. In the grand scheme of things we are nothing, but in the infinitessimal gathering of life, each one of us is precious in our aloneness. Sometimes, if we're lucky the aloneness feels like all-one-ness and then we aren't so lonely. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

loved

16 years ago

thanks

This is my third attempt of replying To you forlovely comment You are kind And Thanks for spending so much time On my poetry... I am a non -entity But I am sure I ‘m a friend of thine As much as you are A good one of mine