Shout the Obvious

Off fifth
We're next to the alley
Suited jerk
With the pattern of velocity

Stamp your fingers
And your palms to make it worse,
Evaded Moments
Might as well be in a hearse

You kids
Who do you think you are?
Folded lies,
You keep lowering the bar.

Tried patience
One gets along without ,
Don't start fueling, cause...
"It makes me want to, shout!"

Cornered
Very close to Fifth
Went down, calmly
Sorry I can't support the myth...
...Shout!

— docmaverick, May 30, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

Critiques

Breakinglogic

16 years ago

Hey doc, love this write of

Hey doc, love this write of yours. Has a really good flow :) I do wonder about the quotations though. Ah, and it read very natural Peace and cheers, logic

docmaverick

16 years ago

You're the man, Logic....

...thanks for reading, and taking the time to comment. The quotations are there because it was a quote from me, I was quoting myself. Sorry 'bout the confusion. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.