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May 30, 2010
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I know I am that Horse
I know I am That Horse
One can take a horse to water
but you can’t make the guy drink
I am perhaps that horse
in this competition
Better luck next time Sir,
for your assistance and judgement
Yes I mean it
You are such a considerate human being
Perhaps the finest
I’ve come across
a long way and about
Regards,
let the competition carry on
I’m not going to make it in any case,
Thanks for permitting me to enter
in this race.
open Sesame ...
Yes of that kind
I shall keep all rules
Next time in my mind
— loved, May 30, 2010
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xena465
16 years ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years ago
thanks
loved
16 years ago
how true
Breakinglogic
16 years ago
No one needs to make you drink, loved
loved
16 years ago
thanks