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I know I am that Horse

I know I am That Horse

One can take a horse to water
but you can’t make the guy drink
I am perhaps that horse
in this competition

Better luck next time Sir,
for your assistance and judgement

Yes I mean it

You are such a considerate human being

Perhaps the finest

I’ve come across
a long way and about

Regards,
let the competition carry on

I’m not going to make it in any case,

Thanks for permitting me to enter

in this race.
open Sesame ...

Yes of that kind

I shall keep all rules

Next time in my mind

 

 

 

— loved, May 30, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Loved

I know for you that the taking part is the important thing, so you are already a winner...nice one. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

how true

..place replace ''horse'' with COW that shall do thanks to uuuuuuuuuuuu
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks

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