loved

May 28, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Your colourful eyes

Your colourful eyes

Your eyes mesmerise,

I suddenly awaken,

My heart remains

Trapped Inside its cage

Rapidly breathlessly taken…

My mind goes a -reeling

When eyes,

Your eyes…

Stare at me

Ah! It’s appealing

I wonder what power

They do play

And

Wish I die

While you’re looking

At my eyes

That sexy
and adorable way…

— loved, May 28, 2010

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Critiques

Breakinglogic

16 years 2 months ago

Stunning loved. Glad you

Stunning loved. Glad you posted it on stream, the edit is benefitting :) peace and cheers, logic

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks friend

thanks frnd one on god in blog quota zero thus

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Fabulous Loved

This is your best to date...I love it. Rosina xena465

loved

16 years 2 months ago

good better best i and we all improve every day so today surpasses all yesterdays why have u adapted Zaks symbol by the way??? DO U KNOW THE ENGLISH FOLKS BURY LETTER Z FROM 01 JUN 2010 ASK them why they're so unthinkable ?

Breakinglogic

16 years 2 months ago

Rest assured that removing z

Rest assured that removing z from the alphabet on June 1st is a hoax, started out as an April fools day joke, then was taken out of context. Lol

loved

16 years 2 months ago

z zulu

..zuly as xulu will not covey the zay glad what u say zay zay and zac be the same till tomorrow again

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Loved

Good luck with the competition. Rosina xena465

loved

16 years 2 months ago

What competition

i am a poet who writes for fun only one competition in life i have won... when they reserved a slot for me as one winner ahead of many and my poem YOU JUST CAN'T was published have u read it ????????????/ book is Say it ain't so By Terry Lyle

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Wee Zak

I added a couple of verses and changed a word or two. I wrote his poem in 20 minutes and then revised it. Rosina xena465

loved

16 years 2 months ago

speed

if u read more of my poems u will beat me in the poetic marathon as it is u r way ahead of a non poet-me shall re-read zak

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