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loved
loved
May 28, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Your colourful eyes

Your colourful eyes

 

 

Your eyes mesmerise,

I suddenly awaken,

My heart remains

Trapped Inside its cage

Rapidly breathlessly taken…

 

My mind goes a -reeling

When eyes,

Your eyes…

Stare at me

Ah! It’s appealing


I wonder what power

They do play

And

Wish I die

While you’re looking

At my eyes

That sexy
and adorable way…

— loved, May 28, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Fabulous Loved

This is your best to date...I love it. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks

good better best i and we all improve every day so today surpasses all yesterdays why have u adapted Zaks symbol by the way??? DO U KNOW THE ENGLISH FOLKS BURY LETTER Z FROM 01 JUN 2010 ASK them why they're so unthinkable ?
loved

loved

16 years ago

z zulu

..zuly as xulu will not covey the zay glad what u say zay zay and zac be the same till tomorrow again
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Hi Loved

Good luck with the competition. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

What competition

i am a poet who writes for fun only one competition in life i have won... when they reserved a slot for me as one winner ahead of many and my poem YOU JUST CAN'T was published have u read it ????????????/ book is Say it ain't so By Terry Lyle
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Wee Zak

I added a couple of verses and changed a word or two. I wrote his poem in 20 minutes and then revised it. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

speed

if u read more of my poems u will beat me in the poetic marathon as it is u r way ahead of a non poet-me shall re-read zak