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Beyond the limits of skies

Beyond the limits of skies

 

Beyond the limits of eternity

Spread the wings of Almighty

They say the skies merge

Beyond the beyond with the Omni

 

I have since searched

All over for Thee

The skies are as majestic

There you reside

Since aeons passed,

Till ages hence

But I can’t yet resolve

The enormousness

Of thy existence Oh Lord

 

If heavens be the limits of your totality

The galaxies be in actuality

Far into the folds of eternal time

Merging with you supreme and sublime

 

Let the skies be your domain

As it is...

Let my wings spread

Be merged nay submerged

In all magnanimity

With my Saviour

Of earth and heavens

And fathomless skies,

Till trinities of eternities

Far in to the realms of unborn time

May I totally insole myself with my master

Of the skies

And all there be with thee

— loved, May 27, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Nice Loved

A bit different from what you usually write...I like it. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks one more time

such poems come once in a way , when my heart is like in a cauldron and many like u now say it is undoubtedly different different different
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

different write for you loved

but i like it i especially like 'Let my wings spread Be merged nay submerged In all magnanimity' love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks

.. I am glad u liked it Though I wonder It’s the kind of poetry One is looking for In the competition I just don’t damn care As my friends Like you Do read and There alone short of it Ends my greed...
Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

16 years ago

I think this is excellent,

I think this is excellent, loved this bit here immensly: " And fathomless skies, Till trinities of eternities Far in to the realms of unborn time " great word usage by the way peace and cheers, logic
Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

16 years ago

Also, wanted to specifically

Also, wanted to specifically emphasize that your use of "trinities of eternities" was masterful one of my favorite word pairings I've ever read. Peace and cheers, logic
loved

loved

16 years ago

you have

You have ..Literally floored me Having taken me So literally Three trinities away To eternity Where and when In the domains of the galaxies Do you propose to meet? Me,me,me ???????????