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Sky is the limit Competition code 053110

Competition code 053110

Sky is the limit

Azure blue,

In the deserts of Sahara

I saw some years gone by

Wow an absolutely clear sky

With diamond studded sparkling stars

All remaining planets guarding by

Venus so exotically adorable,

The Moon just a slight crescent

There in the distance

Was Jupiter

So frantically agile

Ah! Very much non- complacent

A few years later

In the middle of a dark

Canadian cloudy day,

I was flying in a plane

So high and far away

The sun was bright

Till it did finally set

The landing was amidst

Darkest of clouds

There was no, none how-so-ever blue

There wasn’t just at all any hue

It was chilly freezing cold

Deadly white a sheet of white gold.

Who had in heavens?

Consumed the loveliest of blue sky

I can’t now that say why

But twas really so very high

Above the silvery clouds

Yet flaking snows

A lively kicking sky

Yes,

Twas still there

But shy

But shy...

— loved, May 26, 2010

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Critiques

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Loved

This is so much better. Well done Loved. One line I'm not sure about... I can’t now{those} say why ………[did you mean to say [though] here?] Rosina xena465

loved

16 years ago

that

..... ur right the compy language checker made it ...those ... so many times so i gave up and finally forgot to correct it now i have made it THAT thanks ur nice

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Loved its still not entered into the comp until you put the competition code in the box provided on the edit page ... when you click edit you must look down the page and there is a space provided for the code, insert the code and submit and then abracadabra you are in the comp love and hugs JayCee P.S I dont vote on comp entries as I am one of the judges :) ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

loved

16 years ago

i tried

...regrettably i edit yet cant find that elusive code box HHEEELLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPPPPP I GIVE up thanks any way Competition code 053110

loved

16 years ago

thank god

FINALLY FOUND THE HIDING BOX COMPETITION CODE WAS NOW FOUND WRITTEN SO I ENTERED IT .....code 053110 IT's FIRST VICTORY TO CREATE HISTORY . PLEASE JUDGE ON MERIT AND NOT SYMPATHY read all this above in small case there is no threat as some one will say oh hell how dare u shout at me so politely i now add include me include me include me but give the prize to the bestest one will ye. thanks from me loved and lovely

Kailashana

16 years ago

Jayne, you are disallowed to

Jayne, you are disallowed to compete in these contests, however you ARE one of its judges. ~ "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

Seren

16 years ago

I wasnt entering the contest

I wasnt entering the contest I am confused ??? I was just trying to help Loved find the competition box for his entry so it would come up in the list ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

loved

16 years ago

please read my comment to dear Pugs

...down below all for fun i am a horse u know.... who is he by the way does he own this site if so i must lie low prostrate before mighty god I OUGHT TO KNOW

Jonathan Moore

16 years ago

Kids today

--Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)

Jonathan Moore

16 years ago

A Quick Note

Meter has to do with "feet" or syllables of a line while rhyme scheme is similar word sounds. Meter is normally represented as numbers, rhyme scheme as letter groupings. There are a number of excellent sites to review when you search for "poetry meter" that can explain things more in depth, but a general shortcut to illustrate the difference is a Sonnet and Blank Verse. Both are written in iambic pentameter but the Sonnet has a rhyme scheme while the Blank Verse has none. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)

loved

16 years ago

from the one and only CONFUSED SO RIGHTLY JUDGED

It’s simply a learning stage That’s about all I know What a competition I can't compete With stalwarts Poets of a wondrous class When I’m all but signally alone Confused! Can’t follow Simple instructions... Shall learn some how Perhaps all will teach me Still I’m learning At the door step Of my eternal grave I appear to be sincerely brave Hold on to me Competitors and judges Loved is coming...

Jonathan Moore

16 years ago

No

--Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)

loved

16 years ago

i know NOTHING ABOUT POETRY

Jonathan Moore

16 years ago

If you do not understand the rules of a contest

Look up the terms used: http://www.neopoet.com/forum/39313-2010-05-may-contest-rules Because in this thread there is even a link to an explanation of what meter is. We can direct you to the information, we cannot force you to read it. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)

loved

16 years ago

i know ....

...u can take a horse to water but u can't make him drink i am perhaps that horse in this competition better luck next time sir yes i mean it u r such a nice man perhaps the finest i've come across a long way and about regards let the compy carry on i'm not going to make it in any case thanks for permitting me to enter open sasame kind. rgds

loved

16 years ago

Another horsey I....

I know.... One can take a horse to water but you can’t make the guy drink I am perhaps that horse in this competition Better luck next time Sir, for your assistance and judgement Yes I mean it You are such a considerate human being Perhaps the finest I’ve come across a long way and about Regards let the competition carry on I’m not going to make it in any case, Thanks for permitting me to enter Open Sesame Yes of that kind I shall keep all rules Next time in my mind

Beauregard

16 years ago

Loved,

glad to see you finally found that contest code box. I had it outlined in red on picture 3, in my comment to you on the May contest rules. Glad to see you finally found it. The competitions are all about learning new things and expanding your abilities. I am terrible with meter, but I have been working at completing an entry all month. There are still three days left for you to get your poem to fit the rules. There are plenty of internet sources that can help you learn about meter and plenty of books too. I do hope you'll take up the challenge of figuring it out in time. Kelsey

loved

16 years ago

thanks again once more

u have been helpfull as u perhaps know i am of the cuff poet know no rules write and rarely read draft compy looks into the grammar and english i keep correcting till compy gives me flesch readability 100 and grading zero or viv=ce versa ABOVE IS FIRST OFF PROSE CONVERTED INTO POETRY FORM AND THEN I SALUTE MY LAP TOP FOR THE OUTCOME BELOW THAT I CALL POETRY AS MANY HAVE SAID SO OR PROSAIC-POETRY IF IT PLEASES SOME THANKS U have been helpful As u perhaps know I am of the cuff poet Know no rules Write and rarely read draft Compy looks into The grammar and English I keep correcting till compy gives me Flesch readability 100 And grading zero Or vice -versa Then I publish it. People applaud it And Wow my ego bloats... What competition??? I had fun as much as friend did.... Calling me a horsey kid See this is how I make poetry. 96.8/0.9 as per compy thanks and i publish it . people applaud it and wow my ego bloats ... what competition??? i had fun as much as friend did.... calling me a horsey kid

Breakinglogic

16 years ago

Loved, its clear

I love the way you word your lines, I really have to say, the way you write I feel inclined to give five stars, array. Call it biased, maybe, because your writes are styled, In such the way that I see, my favorite writes compiled. peace and cheers, logic

loved

16 years ago

peace be so

at least i have managed to transform one out of so many and now young man u take the lead