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May 26, 2010
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The womb
THE WOMB
I was the progeny
A seed
In a sea dark and warm
Floating
Folded around myself
Lulled into dream
Knowing
Another’s’ heartbeat
I could not see the face
Holding me within
That place of a kinder oblivion
I did not know the world
That was to be
The light that was to blind
And steal me into my mortality
I am a seed
Floating
In a sea dark and cold
A Soul they say
Folded around myself
Unable to see again
The face that held me within
Soon I will be ripped away
Once more
Leaving myself behind
Blind in the light
of
Another oblivion
— Geremia, May 26, 2010
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Nordic cloud
16 years ago
...made clear for us like a little work of art in itself,
Geremia
16 years ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,