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May 24, 2010
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What Man Is This?
An undisputed sovereign
of poetry and prose
has looked upon our efforts
from the tower of his nose
and raged in vocal thunder
of manikins and Gods
expecting us to tremble
at the unimagined odds
against his even seeing
this dream we take for real
yet all the while he's crying
and trying hard to feel
We gather round his glory
and try to ease again
that unrequited ego
which causes him such pain
but all he sees are acolytes
who clamor in despair
for something deep within his soul
he does not wish to share
and yet his heart remembers
those words he wrote before
that honored fallen heros
in poetry of war
C. Lon R. Bruso
of poetry and prose
has looked upon our efforts
from the tower of his nose
and raged in vocal thunder
of manikins and Gods
expecting us to tremble
at the unimagined odds
against his even seeing
this dream we take for real
yet all the while he's crying
and trying hard to feel
We gather round his glory
and try to ease again
that unrequited ego
which causes him such pain
but all he sees are acolytes
who clamor in despair
for something deep within his soul
he does not wish to share
and yet his heart remembers
those words he wrote before
that honored fallen heros
in poetry of war
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, May 24, 2010
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Critiques
poewriter58
16 years ago
Lon
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Dear!
scribbler
16 years ago
What man..
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Scribbler!
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Jayne!
blistered-pen
16 years ago
I picture Zeus for some
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Dear Lady!
xena465
16 years ago
Fabulous read Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Rosina!
Race_9togo
16 years ago
Hey Lonnie,
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Jim!
Breakinglogic
16 years ago
Lonnie, I found no fault in
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Logic!
yenti
16 years ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Ian!
Janice Pearce
16 years ago
What Man
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thaank you, Janice!
Rett
16 years ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Rett!
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years ago
A man's man from afar living a lie, trying to feel whats is real
loved
16 years ago
i don't have
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you so much!