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May 23, 2010
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HELLO ???,,,,,,,silence
Looking up in starry skies
I wonder where you are ,you guys?
surely somewhere else in space
another world has got the grace
Of having life also been blessed
and with life, why not life thinking ?
perhaps to find you is a test
we're searching now with eyes unblinking
Do you ignore beseeching cries
because our ethos you despise?
or are our cries just way too soft
to make it to your aerie's loft
For your reply we always listen
with arrays of steel that glisten
in sun's shine around the world
beneath so many flags unfurled
We listen for just one small phrase
to end our solitary days
are we so uninteresting
we don't deserve reply from questing?
Even aloof condescension
preferred to this quiet and tension
do you view us as low as worms
too primative and full of germs?
Any means (vid, lazer, phone)
to let us know we're not alone
give us reason to keep spending
treasure on a search unending
Or did God create just one frail race
with which to converse in all of space?.......hello?
I wonder where you are ,you guys?
surely somewhere else in space
another world has got the grace
Of having life also been blessed
and with life, why not life thinking ?
perhaps to find you is a test
we're searching now with eyes unblinking
Do you ignore beseeching cries
because our ethos you despise?
or are our cries just way too soft
to make it to your aerie's loft
For your reply we always listen
with arrays of steel that glisten
in sun's shine around the world
beneath so many flags unfurled
We listen for just one small phrase
to end our solitary days
are we so uninteresting
we don't deserve reply from questing?
Even aloof condescension
preferred to this quiet and tension
do you view us as low as worms
too primative and full of germs?
Any means (vid, lazer, phone)
to let us know we're not alone
give us reason to keep spending
treasure on a search unending
Or did God create just one frail race
with which to converse in all of space?.......hello?
— scribbler, May 23, 2010
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Breakinglogic
16 years ago
Hey there scribbler
magics02
16 years ago
Love it and we are here scribe
scribbler
16 years ago
hello
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Scribbler
xena465
16 years ago
Fabulous Stan
yenti
16 years ago
Hi Scribbler
scribbler
16 years ago
Hello