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do come once again

Do come once again 

 

Come once again

 

Into the folds of my arms

 

And

 

Let me entwine you

 

So for ever

 

You mould into my form

 

As I continue to hold on…

 

 

 

Will you for that one spec of time

 

Die for me

 

And

 

I would love to shower

 

The entire world’s pleasures for thee

 

But open your eyes

 

Just once more

 

To let me know,

 

You know,

 

I’d loved you so

 

Than I’d do me myself

 

 

 

Just for a wee moment

 

Will you hold on?

 

Let me be once again my normal self

 

Will you hold on for me?

 

 My love is entirely for thee.

— loved, May 21, 2010

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loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks for the honour

thanks Please do apply your gr88 mind And Errors, as well as some goodness In my compositions find And To improve them also do remind Plddddooo Keep me in your mind… loved www.triond.com lovelyhoney
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

WoW Loved

Very, very nice, like Lou said "Emotional"...I love it. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

WoW THANKS

Thanks for the wowow any how i am glad u loved it some how wowow thank u all the ones who have yet to say wow and wowowowow
Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

16 years ago

Wow

here's for your collection of wow's :) A softly read write, the emotion melted off the page. I do however have a suggestion too, your whole poem was soft, it meshed consistently except for "Will you for that one spec of time " I know i'm being picky here but spec to me is small, hard edged, and inconsistent. Just a thought. to close, nicely done :) peace and cheers, logic
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks

i shall find another equivalent word for spec which may perhaps be more soothing rgds