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Geremia
Geremia
May 20, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Here comes my 19th nervous breakdown : [Rolling stones]

 

 

 Here comes my 19th nervous breakdown : [Rolling stones]

Frizzle, frazzle

Screaming lights

Blind, befuddle and dazzle

To confusion

Like bees buzzing in the brain

Electricity electric

Red and yellow

Sizzle

Shock waves sudden

Lightening blue

Striking white

Piercing

Burning

Turning

Dark into fire

Spinning upward

Downward speeding

Thoughts

Swirling into dizzy

Eyes closing

Not to see

Reality losing

Falling

Into

Insanity

 

— Geremia, May 20, 2010

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Grassfield

16 years ago

Nervous

Great use of imagery...as a teacher....I have this problem quite frequently!!!!!! Enjoyed your write!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

OOH this is sizzling like the sudden affliction

Ann of Norway in the ear to the sound of a firework unawares, as it fizzles and pops with such intensity just close by and frightens the living daylights out of one, you leave me shock-stricken and limp like a worn out rag frazzled at the edges and blackened by the charred masses of the explosions. That's what Longobardolino, you take us with you in your powerfully evocative drama and we know more what it is like than we wish on any other living thing. Annuccia
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magics02

16 years ago

You write your pain and experience

With the vivid words you choose and this one spoke loudly and also softly. Well wishes to you my friend and please write the english words to the Italian words so everyone that does not speak Italian knows of what you speak. I like that. God Bless You Longo Love Mona xxoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
Geremia

Geremia

16 years ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThanks

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thanks Mona. I added the English t ranslation to THE ROMANY FACTOR in Forum.. Poetry, like any art, is truth. Vero, amica mia ?
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magics02

16 years ago

Thank you Longo

Yes very true poetry like any art is truth. Have a good day Longo Love Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived