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Red Roses On The Label...
Nights of terror... screams and shouts
The scent of alcohol and fear
I wanted to save my mother, and kill my father
I was too little, and he was a raging demon
Daylight seemed eons away
Morning light did nothing to erase mother's bruises
I stayed in bed until the creak and thump of his wooden-leg was gone
Hurried breakfast, and off to school
I slept through lunch, and couldn't focus on fractions
He was funny, and a nice guy 'till he drank too much
Which was every day
They all participated... some through acceptance
The bar-man who unlocked the door, for opening round at 7 a.m.
His cronies, buying drinks
The foreman who held his nose, and looked the other way
The cops who let him sleep it off on the side of the road
My mother, because she didn't have the strength to leave him
And me, because I was too little...
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16 years ago
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16 years ago
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16 years ago
Cooking Wine
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16 years ago
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16 years ago
Very well written, it tells
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16 years ago
Thank you...