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magics02
May 18, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Is It You

In sleep we breathe
as a whole
fragrant thoughts
enter once again
 
as you walk by
smell of a rose garden
thorns of love
Is it you

breathing in something
whispers a voice
of love
togetherness
being as one
binded

the wholeness held
entangled forever
fragrant thoughts
enter once again

as you walk by
smell of a rose garden
thorns of love
Is it you

mms 5.18.10

 


 

— magics02, May 18, 2010

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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Annie

Yes I went for that same ship ride, far away where the water is calm and the fragrance of love instilled in me. Thank you Annie as I went out of my realm for a minute, next one maybe a sweet serenade. Love You friend Mona xoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

Thorns 5 of them are born

The thorns of love, May demean love itself So I thought… And Bound, Would be a more appropriate word Perhaps But then it’s your composition You must be having behind it A solitary meaning For I am ignorant So with five stars I replace your thorns LOVED ROSES
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Loved

The thorn of love is the thorns of a beautiful rose. Thank you for comments Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

..go 2 u 4 thanking me thorns or not ur as much as i am we all are ROSES AND a rose w/o thorns can never exist gr88888888888888
mand

mand

16 years 2 months ago

Hello Mona, a lovely poem

Hello Mona, a lovely poem about love, entangled forever, lovely words, lovely poem. Love Mand xxx
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Mand

For stopping by and liking this poem also, I appreciate it and will be by to read you soon gal Love,Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Fabulous

This is different for you and you wrote it as the true poet that you are...Brilliant Mona. Beautiful descriptions. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Yes indeed it is

Rosina glad to see you smiling today. Also want to say yes as I sat here last nite working on my computer I mused on this one and it is what came out. I am glad you all liked it, thank you so much and you have a beautful day Love ya gal xoxooo Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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shirley harrison

16 years 2 months ago

Magic Mona !

Beautiful poetry this morning! well done! much love shirley harrison
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Shirley

Glad to see you on my page once again and thanks for the comment and for the stars too:) You have a beautful day today also Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
hobo

hobo

16 years 2 months ago

wow

wow this is so beautiful my friend, I really really like this one. it makes me wish it was me haha. great read
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Hobo friend

I thought it needed a touch up and may just do that a tad bit more, thank you for stopping on over and enjoy the coffee Love ya guy Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Mona

My favorite lines: the wholeness held entangled forever fragrant thoughts enter once again as you walk by smell of a rose garden thorns of love Is it you and thank you so very much for the pm and your kindness. Love, Cat
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Golden

And I hope this message finds you feeling better for the concert ahead Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

mona magics !!!

magic, mona !! love judy-jane xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Judy

For your visit and how is the book doing/ How can I get a signed copy from you? Love and hugs at ya today:) Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks once again

Please do apply your gr8888est mind And Errors, as well as some goodness In my compositions find And To improve them also do remind Plddddooo Keep me in your mind… loved www.triond.com lovelyhoney
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Sorry guy

I will be by soon and check out your stuff. Not enough hours in a day to do all these things you know, do you work too? ttyl Love Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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ziggy

16 years 2 months ago

hi

good one this well thought out and crafted ,,,,,,,,zigs
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Zigs

This piece just came up one eveing as I sat here at my computer and the thoughts of a time in my life brang me back to that place. Thanks for stopping by and see you soon at the party. LOL Love at ya guy Mona xoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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pleiades

16 years 2 months ago

how beautiful mona.soft,

how beautiful mona. soft, with tender emotion, and a dreamy, almost whimisical feel to it. it carried this reader on a gentle journey. quite lovely cheers p

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