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GENESIS 2010
GENESIS 2010
I
Maker of the Myth
Singer of the Song
Creator of Man
The most glorious Imperfection
Rejection of Father
To Child
We mourn
Your Passing
II
Systems set into place
We continue the human race
Without You
Mechanically tuned
Genetically defined
Blind
To the mysteries ahead
Silence of the dead
III
We follow
A universal ebb and flow
Never to know
What it is we do
Where we go
When Body’s last breath births the Soul
IV
Eden is broken
No Karma
No Christ
No Golden Rule
Spoken
The world
Spins oblivious
n circles continous
Reality in dream
Dream’s illusions
Like Furies
In madness we dance
Around fires
Of
Fear and delusion
V
Parallel lines of Time
Never to meet
Hurl into infinite Space
Infinity ends
To begin its circle
Again
Leaving hollow voices
Behind
VI
Maker of the Myth
Singer of the Song
Creator of Man
Your most glorious Imperfection
Rejection of Father
To Child
We mourn
Your Passing
Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
.hill tops high, you view the sky's reflection, man
Geremia
16 years ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaTakk, Ann