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GENESIS 2010

GENESIS 2010

I

Maker of the Myth
Singer of the Song
Creator of Man
The most glorious Imperfection
Rejection of Father
To Child
We mourn
Your Passing

II

Systems set into place
We continue the human race
Without You
Mechanically tuned
Genetically defined
Blind
To the mysteries ahead
Silence of the dead

III

We follow
A universal ebb and flow
Never to know
What it is we do
Where we go
When Body’s last breath births the Soul

IV

Eden is broken
No Karma
No Christ
No Golden Rule
Spoken
The world
Spins oblivious
n circles continous
Reality in dream
Dream’s illusions
Like Furies
In madness we dance
Around fires
Of
Fear and delusion

V

Parallel lines of Time
Never to meet
Hurl into infinite Space
Infinity ends
To begin its circle
Again
Leaving hollow voices
Behind

VI

Maker of the Myth
Singer of the Song
Creator of Man
Your most glorious Imperfection
Rejection of Father
To Child
We mourn
Your Passing

 

 

— Geremia, May 12, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

.hill tops high, you view the sky's reflection, man

Ann of Norway Grand you stand on hill tops high, you view the sky's reflection man, with such a noble grace such well chosen words, so complete a thought a poem, screed. You show us all a mind that's understood our human kind, in the wood of evolution, his birth, his life, his death reviewed, from your individual perspective, you unfurl your scroll, reveal to us its Genesis. Our dream, our wish, our meaning, this all uttered in a succinct manner, as noble as the Eagle, that bears the Holy Bible on his back, yes, we judge this one as good. Longobardolino, good, with love from Annuccia.