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May 04, 2010
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The Mark of Abel
The Mark of Abel
I was floored
By the recognition
Of my own Imperfection
Progeny of the Fall
I am a flawed creature of Creation
In the middle of a breath
I was stricken
By the first bite of the Beast
To my knees taken
In medias res
Into a world of stasis thrown
All grace of movement gone
My dignity stolen
My destiny known
My spirit sickened in the knowing
A warrior no longer
No shield of muscle and sinew
No sword of fire and steel
To save me from God’s violence
I don’t’ run anymore
Barely can walk
Still can talk
The dream of invincibility broken
Hollow echoes to prayers
I no longer believe
Reverberate
In a lonely universe
No one to hear
A strange labor this
This birthing of a soul
Separation of Mother and Child
From here to Infinity…
Miserere, Domine
— Geremia, May 04, 2010
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Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
..the reality of what is the NOW for you,
Geremia
16 years 1 month ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaTakk :)
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
all labours are different longo
Geremia
16 years 1 month ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,
Geremia
16 years 1 month ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaMy