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The Mark of Abel

 

The Mark of Abel

I was floored
By the recognition
Of my own Imperfection
Progeny of the Fall
I am a flawed creature of Creation

In the middle of a breath
I was stricken
By the first bite of the Beast
To my knees taken
In medias res
Into a world of stasis thrown
All grace of movement gone
My dignity stolen
My destiny known
My spirit sickened in the knowing

A warrior no longer 
No shield of muscle and sinew
No  sword of fire and steel
To save me from God’s violence
I don’t’ run anymore
Barely can walk
Still can talk
The dream of invincibility broken
Hollow echoes to prayers
I no longer believe
Reverberate
In a lonely universe
No one  to hear

A strange labor this
This birthing of a soul
Separation of Mother and Child
From here to Infinity…

Miserere, Domine

 

 
— Geremia, May 04, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

..the reality of what is the NOW for you,

Ann of Norway As the background music to this poem, I hear the drum, slowly and deliberately its stamps its feet like the sound of heavy footsteps approaching nearer and nearer leading to the inevitable end. The procession of your words at each phrase impressing the reader with the reality of what is the NOW for you, one we would rather banish from the face of the earth, so helping others in this same trial of life; you express this well, and impress on us its serious tones that will be hard to ignore even when we have left this page. Moving poetry Joe, Annuccia.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

all labours are different longo

emotionally intense. i feel your despair as i read your words can i quote without sounding trite- 'the greater the labour the greater the reward...' love judy
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 1 month ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you, Judy. It is the nature of the human condition. Who said it was fair, yes? Frustration more than despair....:) Joe
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 1 month ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaMy

J.B. Longo-Geremia My poetry... PHOENIX RISING I strike the soul With the ecstasy of cold steel Ravish the senses Tear into your heart And Make it bleed To feel What I feel Fire and Ice Intensity of energy Movement into melancholy I survive myself And My humanness Steal away to hell Rise to heaven again Tell My singular history Into the depths of My quintessential self You with me Burning into ashes Phoenix rising