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Yesterday's flowers

 

Yesterday's Flowers


Where are the flowers of yesterday
Where have they all gone
The joys, the pains
The laughs , the tears
The Time that  was mineI’ve lived a thousand years or more
It seems
In a world of fantasy and dreams
Reality hovers closely now
As my illusions fade
And
I linger here
Alone
No regrets
For
The life I’ve  madeRecollections of then
Scenes played over in memory
Pass into forgetfulness
And
OblivionThe same for you and me
In  this Cosmic gameThe End comes for all
Each and every one
Still
I wonder
Where have all the flowers gone
Will I see them again?    
— Geremia, May 01, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

...from your words again and again and again.

Ann of Norway Flowers are perennial, at least some of them are and they will come again and again, but maybe you will not see them, and yet the you that is conscious now will always retain that possibility with your imagination's eye, and when you're gone there will be no I to see with and the thought will become irrelevant. Oh goodness that was not a very consoling, or poetic thought was it, but then it is a poem, and it stands alone with its own meaning and that can be read and reread again and again; and the perfume of its words may carry on into a future, so the flowers will burst forth from your words again and again and again. No? This is not sad unless the individual flowers or bunch of flowers are thought of in the context of their particular meaning in time and then they become the memories which is where the quote came from, the song, the war and the past painful losses of sweet flowers of man. My latest thoughts on reading this poem Longobardolino, Love from Annuccia.
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 1 month ago

An archetypical metaphor

J.B. Longo-Geremia Yes, it stands alone on its own merit; yet, it is open-ended and can be seen so many different ways. This is an a rchetypical metaphor dating back to Francois Vlllon in the Mddle Ages: "Ou sont les neiges d'antan...?" [BALLADE DES DAMES DE JADIS] Longobardolino
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raj

16 years 1 month ago

very thoughtful

Hello Mr.Longo... very thought full reflections on life and its mysteries...i loved your use of "where have all the flowers gone" while you reminisce ...a good read it was for me.. warmly..raj (sublime_ocean)..
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 1 month ago

J.B.

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thanks! longo
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 1 month ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThanks,

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thanks, Eph. I commented t Annaabove, the nature of the "cliche" dating back to the French medieval poets. Source of many lyrics, I have good days I have bad days But At least I have days....:) Joe