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Apr 19, 2010
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PHOENIX RISING--updated
PHOENIX RISING
I strike the soul
With fury
The ecstasy of cold steel
Ravish the senses
Tear into your heart
And
Make it bleed
To feel
What I feel
Fire and Ice
Intensity of energy
Movement into melancholy
Escape into fantasy
Stunned by reality
I survive myself
And
My humanness
Steal away to hell
Rise to heaven again
Tell
My singular history
Into the depths of
My quintessential self
You with me
Burning into ashes
Phoenix rising
Again
— Geremia, Apr 19, 2010
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Seren
16 years 1 month ago
You already know what I
Bonitaj
16 years 1 month ago
Longo!
Geremia
16 years 1 month ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you.
Bonitaj
16 years 1 month ago
and now love it
Geremia
16 years 1 month ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank