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PHOENIX RISING--updated

PHOENIX RISING

I strike the soul
With fury
The ecstasy of cold steel
Ravish the senses
Tear into your heart
And
Make it bleed
To feel
What I feel
Fire and Ice
Intensity of energy
Movement into  melancholy
Escape into fantasy
Stunned by reality

I survive myself
And
My humanness
Steal away to hell
Rise to heaven again
Tell
My singular history
Into the depths of
My quintessential self
You with me
Burning into ashes
Phoenix rising
Again

 

 

 

 

 

 

— Geremia, Apr 19, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

You already know what I

You already know what I think of this one beautifully written dear Joe Sigh again Love and biggest hugs your Jayne-Chloe x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 1 month ago

Longo!

I absolutely adore this and everything about it except the format! I just found it so hard to read -too spaced out! Excellent write thought BOnita j