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Eviceration and Exposed
(Part 1)
Do not bare your soul
don't pin it out so that the crows
can get at it and peck at your vitals
and feast on your very heart
don't sit idly by and allow the vagabonds
and the thieves to raid your private thoughts
eviscerate that which was once whole
instead hold your inner turmoil close
dissect it, and examine yourself
learn that introspection is best unexposed
internal explorations with limited access
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(Part 2)
Expose your every whim
lay them out to dry
allow examination
let there be a meal made of your heart
let the populous explore
every morsel devoured
eviscerate that which was once whole
vomit and belch, let it rip
strip back the layers
shred your personal life
For arts sake ?
2 POEM SET- FOR AND AGAINST TRUTH
Critiques
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
You know Lou
lou
16 years 1 month ago
hi
Geremia
16 years 1 month ago
Evisceration
lou
16 years 1 month ago
hi
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Love that one too Longo
Geremia
16 years 1 month ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYou are
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Lou, how true either or
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks
Geezer
16 years 1 month ago
Cutting edge...
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Hey
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Hi
Dalton
16 years ago
This poem speaks of two
lou
16 years ago
Introvert