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Apr 18, 2010
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THE JUDAS KISS--updated
THE JUDAS KISS
Sweet venom
Brushing gently on the lips
Of innocence
The spirit reels
In orgasmic epiphany
Of
Love and desire
The Judas kiss
Mesmerized in truth’s delusion
Lulled into dream
By the serpents dance
Sudden revelation and knowing
Paralyses senses and mind
As the poison reaches the Soul
Stunned into Death’s dying
— Geremia, Apr 18, 2010
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Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Joe this is a dark moody
Geremia
16 years 3 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaI have
Geremia
16 years 3 months ago
PHOENIX RISING
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
As long as night turns into
Geremia
16 years 3 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYes,
manawa
16 years 3 months ago
how bitter sweet this judas
Geremia
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you
Dalton
16 years 3 months ago
there are two sides to every
Geremia
16 years 3 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYes, that
Geremia
16 years 3 months ago
J.B. Longo-Geremia Sorry, it
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