The Phoenix Rises

Your wee write reads as it indicates, as just a statement to question. I feel this is not a poem, sorry, but I have read your others and found them to be written from your heart. Looking forward to reading more soon. Lyz. XX

Very nice. Your poem has slightly lifted me from my doldrums. My favorite lines are: Wish you longer life And Better days to come As there’s only one life to go by… Hope your pen reaches The vaster audience Of this mundane And Lonelier world Always, Cat

of yours so far, this piece stands as my favorite. And ducks're some of my favorite people; besides Buster, my wonderful pet white duck (who's, incidentally, one great conversationalist), I have special regard for the mallards that fly overhead so often, teasing Buster with their sudden appearance and (just-as-sudden) disappearance. As to To help them unearth gold Studied with diamonds… do you mean to say To help them unearth gold Studded with diamonds... I've tried to make sense of it with "studied" as your intention. Having a little trouble. Can you enlighten? Thanx, Chuck

to whom are you giving praise? it's a lovely dedication. lol judy

Now this is beautiful and yes, full of praise from the heart. Wonderful. Where you have written studied diamonds should it be studded. The spell check lady is here, lol. No, this is high on the scale as your others. Well written. Love Lyz. XX

J.B. Longo-Geremia I do agree with Cat. And your lyrics are striking. Longo