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Apr 15, 2010
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THE RAZOR'S EDGE--updated
THE RAZOR’S EDGE
I walk day to day
On razor’s edge
Careful not to fall
In fear of death’s intrusion
Mourning faith lost
And
God’s own passing
Scarred by Mind’s illusions
The silence of the dead
Voices never heard again
I seek no clarity
For there is none
I’ve given up my soul
To reason’s betrayal
In heart’s innocence
And
Walk on razor’s edge
In fear of Life’s intrusions
And Time's end...
— Geremia, Apr 15, 2010
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Teapots Tempest
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Good form
Seren
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Dear Joe
lyz
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Dear Joe
Nordic cloud
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Any moment to be divided yet again