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CROWN OF THORNS: explanation of ON BUTTERFLY WINGS
Crown of Thorns
I had many stories to tell
Thoughts rushing through my mind
Images and visions
All put into rhyme
Sharing myself with others
Of a kind
Waiting for Godot
To answer my call
Hungry to know
The wherefore and why
But then
I began to fall
Into silent disillusion
A crown of thorns
This “poetry” of mine
Relentless self crucifixion
Bleeding
What you call
The Soul
Staring into nothingness
And
Seeing nothing
I leave behind
For you to hear
From time to time
Echoes of a voice
Once clear and strong
Fading into the silence
Of memory
Where it now belongs
Addio a tutti...
Longo-Geremia
Ecclesiastes 3 (King James Version)
Ecclesiastes 3
1To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven:
2A time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted;
3A time to kill, and a time to heal; a time to break down, and a time to build up;
4A time to weep, and a time to laugh; a time to mourn, and a time to dance;
5A time to cast away stones, and a time to gather stones together; a time to embrace, and a time to refrain from embracing;
6A time to get, and a time to lose; a time to keep, and a time to cast away;
7A time to rend, and a time to sew; a time to keep silence, and a time to speak;
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Longo, please don’t do
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
some cups are still full
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Longobardolino mio
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Joe
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Joe
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
This is very touching. I